What do you think of this beginning? does it sound like a book you would purchase?

Honestly, i didn't read alot of it but from the bits and pieces that I caught, it sounds good and descriptive. Don't listen to what the other poster said, they don't know what they are talking about, because in the end you will be the one making the big bucks, not them. I liked the pieces that i read and YES it does have potential, if you like when can exchange emails because I am also and avid writer and I posted a piece of my work on here for critiquing. You can read it and tell me what you think. my email is cna2006485@yahoo.com